Wednesday, February 3, 2010
What would you do if you were invisible?
Say you were invisible, what would you do?? I would live in the mall with my other invisible friends. We would have to disable the security cameras because if the security guards were watching and they randomly saw floating objects that would be really suspicious. We would have food and clothes and even beds. You could even listen in on peoples conversations when they are shopping. We could have anything you wanted and not get caught. I think it would be so much fun to run around the mall at night, although it would be kind of creepy, but if there was and creepy people they wouldn't be able to see me and kidnap me! Imagine during the day steeling someones shopping cart and slowly walking away with it. They would think the mall is haunted. I wonder if you were invisible, could you walk through walls? Hmmmm... If you could that would be really cool because when you were taking something from a store you wouldn't have to go through the sensor things that beep, you could just walk through the wall. I would love to be invisible for a day!!
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Good job! I really like you strong ending and concluding sentence! It really grabed my attention! The only thing is that it could have been longer and more detailed! Oh and don't forget to proof read! 3.5/5
ReplyDeletegood job I think living in a mall would be cool I'd eat the whole time though 3 of 5
ReplyDeleteYou had some really good ideas! It stays on topic and your ideas are clear. I think you could've added some more detail, but overall I would give you a 3!
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